Sorry I cant hear you over you yelling about your screen flashing and confusion.
Your own personal Predator's story
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YOOOO MAAAAN!!! I fuc&ing enjoyed it!!! That was cooool AF!!! How did you come up with such detailed story bro?? Noooice!!!
BROOOOO!!! Fuc&ing AWESOOOOOME!!! I loved it!!! I enjoyed all of it!!!
Really, thanks it was my first story I wrote, and I enjoyed writing it a lot, so thanks for introducing me to something I enjoy.
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@LordDIOBrando2 @Dutch1 you guys are fuc&ing awesome!!! I did ejoy both stories sooo damn much!!! I swear o my mother’s grave, I had a huge smile when reading both your stories. I loved them!!!
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Thanks, but which story did you like more?
Bro, I swear I wouldn’t be able to decide. Both had great things, yours was more like a big and really cool story an @LordDIOBrando2’s had very nice details. I can’t choose one; I swear. I loved them both!!!
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Thanks
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Don’t make me destroy you again lol
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You couldnt destroy a cardboard box.
wait im in the story? yay! thank you!
glad you liked them!
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How did you come up with such detailed story bro?? Noooice!!!
Well, my process is trying to like describe an action or sequence of events, and then add details.
“D’quan jumped down from the tree and roared”
This describes an action, but it’s very bland.
“D’dquan leaped down from the tree. He looked around and arched his back. He let out a huge, booming roar that shook the trees.”
That is much more detailed.
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Your welcome, but you die, sorry.
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Log 1279. Subject: “R’ka Sain’ja”
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Height: 8’5”
Gender: Male.
Skin Pattern: Orange
Eye Color: Red
Identifying features: The subject had dyed orange dreadlocks with armor with the design of fire. After a deadly ambush, subject was left badly injured and needed to have a replacement augmented right arm and eyes. The arm, while containing wristblades, contained extendable claws from the fingers, a built in plasma caster, and wrist launcher. Caution Don’t let the eyes fool you, for they can look through walls and scan surfaces and buildings for signs of life and possible heat signatures.
SUBJECT ANALYSIS The past of the character determines, he is one of 3 siblings of the original Jungle Hunter. While growing up in the clan of Arditi, he learned to control his anger he had for Dutch, and finally accepted his father’s death and moved on, and started experimenting with augmentations and weapon desgins.FINAL NOTES After the ambush which cost him his eyes and arm, R’ka started fiddling around with the possibility of creating a cybernetic version of himself, in the event if something were to badly damage his body. As that were the case due to his brother Shirome and frenemy Ralanax or now known as Stitch he was able to fully transfer his organs into the body, but everyday the body sort of glitches and shocks him every now and then. Not much is known about his future plans, if he choses to die within the armor, or transfer a part of himself into a new body. But all we know now, is that he plans to live his life out to the fullest with his family.
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please don’t tell me the cybernetic body has anything to do with that prdator killer thing from the predator
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A long time ago, in a post far far away… I created a post based on a kit-bashed figure I made and posted pics. The post was called Arrr matey! The pirate predator be here, I think. Go look for the pics if you like. Here is the story (which is better than the one illfonic will have for their undoubtedly inferior pirate pred )
His name is Hook.
After sneaking onto the Queen Anne’s Revenge, he got black out drunk on rum and tried to kill and claim Edward Teach, the legendary Blackbeard. It cost him a hand and he fell overboard. To add insult to injury, a swivel gun shot took out the shoulder mounted plasma caster.
Thus disgraced, his clan leader refused to allow him back on their ship until his honor was restored. He took the broken pieces of his plasma caster, wrist launcher and a maintenance tool kit and fashioned his hook-hand. Its made from ever-sharp vertinarium, given to him by his clan-brother, Big Red.
His wounds dressed and new appendage fashioned, he made his way back onto Blackbeards ship to challenge the captain to single combat. Just then, the British fleet arrived and laid siege to the pirates and the beast. The waves rose, a mighty wind storm blew in and all ships were tossed about as toys to a toddler, but still the battle raged! A British Lieutenant noticed a massive, shimmering ghost on the deck, striding toward the desperate pirate, throwing sailor and scalawag out of its way as if the Devil himself had come to claim a soul.
Finally within reach of his prize, Hook dropped his cloak and kicked the scoundrel clear across the deck, into his own cabin door. Stunned, Blackbeard managed to get to his knees to see again the hulking form against the night sky, a look in its eyes he knew all too well. Before Teach could make a sound, Hook brought up his hook under and into Teach’s chin with such force that his head and entire spine ripped free of his now lifeless body. It flopped about on the deck as a great fish dumped from a net.
Hook turned around and noticed that all combat had ceased, every eye now fixed on him and his prize. He bent and took the largest of Blackbeards pistols, sword and overcoat. Still, no man uttered nary a peep. Prizes in-hand, the hunter leaned back and roared his victory to the Heavens. He strode to the plank on the starboard side and leapt o’er the side, disappearing into the dark waters never to be seen again by any living eyes. While official British Naval records state that Teach was captured and beheaded, his crew up until their last days in prison swore that it was Davy Jones himself, come to claim his due. The surviving Royal sailors still hear the roar of the beast in their nightmares.
Back aboard the Yautja craft, Hook cleaned his prize, mounting it at the top of his trophy wall. He donned the overcoat and made his way to the grand chamber to claim his rewards. He was gifted a pistol and a massive cutlass sword. The pistol is a handheld plasma caster made to look like a flintlock by none other than Greyback himself. His vertinarium cutlass fashioned by the most skilled Yautja weaponer, Spiketail. Now he leads his own crew of Youngbloods, their cloaked hover-skiff overtaking ships on every ocean on earth and across planets untold. None are truly safe from this mightiest of Pirates in any galaxy!
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No no totally different, think cyborg
thank god, 2018’s predator was worse then this game
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