Complains About Prey

[Finessology]

@Eshtion

tip the main characters off

The definition of buildup gtfo my inbox nerd

@Eshtion

Ignoring the fact that that the pred in 2 wouldn’t have a reason to do this, while the pred in prey did, this would work. It would add to the mystery from perspective of the characters

Rats bite.
What if that scorpion had stung JH lel.

such a random shitty exposition and an even worse way to try to connect the two characters, we’ll agree to disagree

[Eshtion]

@Finessology

The definition of buildup gtfo my inbox nerd

@Finessology

as their token suspense

You literally used the word tension

Either

A. Your not paying attention enough to the conversation to separate your Grammer nazi bullshit and what were referencing, on which why do I bother?

Or

B. Your purposely manipulating the conversation to make me look bad by goal post moving and ignoring context

Also no it’s not

Build up is tension

Set up is making a specific point clear in a story for later events. Not the same

@Finessology

Rats bite.

Except

A. Rats wouldn’t just bite a pred like that

B. Even if it did a rat’s bite is nothing compared to a venomous snakes bite, hell even a non venomous snake bite.

@Finessology

What if that scorpion had stung JH lel.

That’s not even the same thing

No seriously how is that scenario even a comparison?

Because it involves a small animal attacking the pred? There’s more to these scenes than just that Fine. You realize that right?