Didn’t you get on me for criticising your T.V show idea?
Critism and echo chambers
For being this gal, because you grossly misunderstood the entire thing. But at the end it seemed it finally dawned on you. But none of what you said was constructive either.
No. You wrote bad fan fiction. And you wanted everyone to ignore the bad fan fiction and only focus on the idea. Besides if none of what I was critizing mattered why comment on it at all?
No it didn’t. I just got tired of you defending your bad fan fict with it “doesn’t matter”.
I was being constructive. By saying remove the parts of your story that were utter fan fiction nightmare fuel.
I don’t need to tell you how to improve it. Saying what’s wrong is enough of critism to get you to think on how to improve it.
Also I like how your insulting me when your the one who came up with the most pandering, fan fict, inspired story that misses what the franchise is about.
But no I’m the crazy one for god forbid having a conversation about how bad that fan fict was.
All you did was say what you wanted to see in something. It was no different from any other fanboy/gal bitching about whatever the subject is. You still fail to see the point of that. The post I made a bit ago was merely to suggest that Terry Crews and Arnold head up a Predator streaming show that, innthe opening scene, pokes fun at and retcons The Predator out of existence. Any other details beyond that were arbitrary and pointless. Yet you got you panties in a wad at the idea of Dutch dying heroically and passing the mantle on to another, and any mention that Machiko may stink, which wasn’t any part of the thing I wrote anyway. You insisted on bringing that in. PLEASE understand that. I don’t know how much more clear that could be.
Now, I say constructive criticism is good, because it is. You were not constructive. Go back and read it all. No objective person would call your words constructive at all. You’d be labeled the baby of Comic book guy and the Seven Minute abs guy, unwilling and unable to grasp any concept regardless of how simple or complex any subject matter may be if it falls outside of “I want X. So if something doesn’t have X, I hate it.” Rather than, “I want X. So maybe I suggest a way to work X into something, potentially making them both better.”
Don’t quit your day job. Unless this is somehow your day job.
Yes thats not critism. Pointing out continuity errors is what I want in a TV show…
A. Just because it doesn’t matter to you doesn’t mean you can’t improve the details anyways
B. It’s still critism. Just because you don’t care doesn’t mean it’s wrong
C. Why even bother responding then.
OH NO WHAT IS THIS DISCOMTEMPT!! STOP THIS MAD MAN!!!
WHAT HE RESPONDING BACK AND HAVING A CONVERSATION ON WHY OR WHY NOT WE SHOULD KILL DUTCH OFF!!! WHAT!!!
OMG ANOTHER RESPON… Oh wait wrong guy
oH AND THERE HE IS AGAIN A CONVERSATION WITH A WILLING PERSON HE MUST BE MAD AND HAVING HIS PANTIES IN A WAD THE TRADAGY!!!
dude I’m just not a fan of the idea. Apparently I’m the bad guy for that.
That’s the great thing about forums. You can take your time and separate conversations so that you can have multiple conversations at the same time.
Yes I at least wanted an explanation as to why you thought Machiko sucked.
Also I guess I’m not allowed to start a discussion. Or talk about anything you don’t care about.
Pointing out continuity errors, error in logic, and fan fiction writing isn’t constructive?
I did. And for the vast majority of the time I was pointing out errors in logic. I.E what you shouldn’t write.
LOL THE DUDE WHO WROTE BAD FAN FICTION IS CALLING ME THE FAT LOSER FOR MAKING FUN OF IT LOL
No I hate fan fiction. As to Dutch I’m fine with it, just not preferred.
Ok I want no fan fiction. So remove the fan fiction. Again the entire first season outside of a few personal gripes and the bad ending (regarding the Royce and Isabelle) is completely fine and I want a show of it.
It’s just the rest is inherently bad
Also really? Critism is only constructive if it adds something? Really? So I guess ideas that don’t work period (cough) Pred killer (cough) genetically enhanced preds (cough) can stay and can’t be critisized.
Also I like how you came up with 2 more seasons of idea’s just to not care about them. Either that or they were a reaction response to my critism In which you had a fan fiction cliffhanger that you didn’t even care about. And the show’s ending would be massively better if you just got rid of it. Especially since you could still have a season 2 because you still have a surviving cast. You could even have a funeral scene sending Dutch off of the franchise if you wanted.
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I didn’t care about it at all at that point, but you just kept going. So I kept going. Made it all up on the spot. I never gave a fudge about any of it beyond the opening. You read something contrary to your pred wet dreams and stomped your heels about it. Simple as that.
And I’m very, very clear on that anything involved in The Predator should be scrapped. Predkiller and G.E preds fall into that category, since, ya know, they were in it.
Then stop talking. I’m not the jerk because you were tired of a conversation.
I didn’t know making fun of something bad was being mad. I guess whenever some one makes a joke at the expense of the Predator they’re just mad and not really having fun.
Face it dude you made bad fan fict, I had fun with it, and now your mad. Nice projection.
Oh but why not
Or you a mad fan who didn’t get what he wants???
Keep in mind I enjoy critizing. That was a small hobby to me, hence why I kept going.
I can see that. Stevie Wonder-comicbook guy-seven munite abs guy loves bitching. Who would’ve guessed?
No one got what they want in The Predator. I can’t think of anyone who got what they paid for. We all just wanted a good 4th Predator film. We got diarrhea. And, our back n forth aside, I really don’t think there’s a single redeemable thing in that movie. I’ve tried and I’ve tried. Maybe I’m too harsh with it. But it’s just that bad.
I got good stuff from P2. Some good stuff from Preds, though I believe that was due to budgetary concerns and time constraints. The Pred was just a shart-sammich jammed in our faces.
Edit: I found a good thing!! The action figures were neat. Thats it.
Lol. Since when were the fan fiction writers the sane ones.
Then why don’t you try to improve it like you want me to improve yours?
Then improve like you want me to.
And I think there’s a single redeemable thing in your 2nd and 3rd season of fan fiction. So improve on the movie like you want me too.
No your right it’s complete trash outside of some good scenes and jokes, some things (like your bad fan fiction) are inherently bad.
And the only critism is to burn it. You can’t improve on it.
I have to question did what you write didn’t come off as fan fict? Does it honestly sound good to you outside what you care about?
No, it’s retarded. I’m aware it’s retarded. Outside of the opening tongue-in-cheek dialogue about The Predator, it’s clearly all dumb ass bullshit. That’s why I was and continued to be astounded by your reactions to something I typed on the shitter!
And I can’t improve on a turd that’s already been flushed.
In truth, if I were to helm a project like that, I’d bring it back to basics. A hunt, in the past though, like during the age of piracy, like Golden angels story or something.
Wait you agree with me that writing sucks…
THEN WHY IS IT A PROBLEM THAT I MAKE FUN OF IT
Can’t I critisize for fun?
THEN WHY DIDN’T YOU SHARE THAT INSTEAD OF BAD FAN FICTION!!
YOU MAKE NO SENSE!!!
IF YOU THOUGHT IT SUCKED TO WHY NOT JUST JOIN WITH ME IN MAKING FUN OF IT
Honestly I don’t know what the fuck you two are talking about about but I would watch a movie where dutch dies.
Yeah a show can be good if no main characters dies, but It gets extremely fucking boring having the same formula of good guys always win.
Fuck that.
Tho at this point it’s not like there can ever be a new original plot.
We’ve seen everything.
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Because I think it’s funny…
This stopped being rational long ago. I just couldn’t help myself but mess with the guy, so I just kept going and going. I thought he’d catch on eventually, but he never did, and here we are.
Well it’s not that main characters can’t die, just not dutch imo
Could even have a complete squad wipe at the end of the first season and end with a lost.
Or Maybe Dutch can’t go on a mission and it’s a near squad wipe etc.
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It’s 2021
You can’t tell tell the trolls from the idiots anymore
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All of the predator expanded universe is fanfiction tier, especially the novels. And machiko is a self-insert-tier mary sue.
How?
I’d like specifics to some one who hasn’t read the book.
Very true. So much gets lost in the reading of text as opposed to verbal communication. As I typed every word, I spoke it as Neil from Family guy, going to the Xmen convention.
I still love the idea of Crews and Arnold together and I really do not like Machiko (the Nolan way of humans using Pred gear is much better IMO), but the rest was pure nonsense.
In actuality, I love nerd debates. Here’s to you, bean!